I really like drawing her. Not sure exactly why. Also, you may notice that the large panel of her is, in fact, a tracing of an earlier (rougher) sketch. At the time, I just wanted to draw her in her parka/overcoat/thing, but when I was done, I thought, "actually, that's exactly what I was thinking when I wrote her introduction scene."
There's a part of me that's still amazed that it only took three months to get from there to here.
Script:
ALWIN: You ain't an engineer...
[He starts circling around the still-shocked Kaleem, peering at him in a somewhat creepy way.]
ALWIN: Whatcha doin'? Whatcha doin', eh?
[From somewhere across the room, a green burst of light
zaps him in the ass. He howls, and bounces off into a corner,
grumbling. Kaleem peeks above his arms, to see a girl come strolling
towards him. She's wearing a parka and goggles, making it nearly
impossible to see her face. She's also carrying a large gun.]
KAY: Sorry about him.
I changed a few minor things in the script, as you can see... For one, I thought Kaleem should be more bewildered than jumpy after seeing Alwin get shot in the ass. I also wasn't sure how I should draw him bouncing off. :P Some phrases just don't translate well from script to page...
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