US Ch. 3 Page 1

I know I said I'd start working on Ch. 3 the moment I finished Ch. 2... and I did, actually. But I was kinda fatigued from working on Ch. 2, and long story short, you DON'T want to know what the first draft of this page looked like. 'Twas awful.
But now I'm back in the mood, so here we go! Time for Ch. 3.

I wonder, should I post the script in the description, since I'm not writing the lines on the pages anymore? I might as well. Without the script, the pages can get kinda dull.
Bear in mind that stuff often gets changed/edited in the process of script -> draft -> final. Lots of the visual stuff gets made up on the fly-- Kaleem taking off his jacket during the conversation at the end of Ch. 2, for example. That wasn't in the script, but I wanted him to be doing something more interesting than just sitting there.
Anyway...

INT: Kal's Quarters

    [Kaleem wakes up shivering.]

KALEEM: Hey, Phil...

PHIL: Yes?

KALEEM: What's the temperature in here?

PHIL: Two degrees.   

KALEEM: Two...! Errg. Where is my father?

PHIL: Main Bridge.

    [Grumbling, Kaleem gets out of bed and pulls on his uniform. He slouches out into the corridor.]

In retrospect, that *yawn* isn't exactly appropriate. *groan* seems better... gonna go change that now...  

And yes, this is how one gets ready in the morning in the year 10007. There's nothing computers can't do...